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Literature Text
Tonight I ask of you...
Would you do me the favor of ending this pain?
Don't look at me like I'm the furthest from sane!
It's torture...its madness
It's sorrow and sadness
My existence a nightmare from which I can't wake
And no measure of distance prevents my heart from break
Every night I pray to God it will end
But he never shows mercy, no reaper does he send
There are those who should never fall for love's charm
For once they are broken, they only embrace harm
Unable to accept, unable to deal
Tortured by every overdosed emotion they feel
It is for those like us that only one end is clear,
Please send me away, forever my dear....
Would you do me the favor of ending this pain?
Don't look at me like I'm the furthest from sane!
It's torture...its madness
It's sorrow and sadness
My existence a nightmare from which I can't wake
And no measure of distance prevents my heart from break
Every night I pray to God it will end
But he never shows mercy, no reaper does he send
There are those who should never fall for love's charm
For once they are broken, they only embrace harm
Unable to accept, unable to deal
Tortured by every overdosed emotion they feel
It is for those like us that only one end is clear,
Please send me away, forever my dear....
Is it not more merciful to kill me once by the dagger, than to let me die every night through a thousand lonely sunsets? (Opinions?)
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Well, dying and waking up again I'd say is a blessing from God because if you died with the dagger and never came back where do you think you would go? I believe God is merciful and he wants you to keep praying because when you continually seek his face you will be blessed beyond measure. Also if he gave you instant pleasure from your suffering would you really be as grateful as I'm sure you will be when this is over? Would you still continue to look for him based on temporary pleasures? (Sorry, I hope this wasn't offensive. This is just an opinion.)
Plus also very good poem. I've been there. I've felt that feeling of hopelessness before.
Plus also very good poem. I've been there. I've felt that feeling of hopelessness before.